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Like Ink from a Broken Pen

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The venomous recollection
Of the sights and the sounds that permeate
The soul, the skin, the ever mutating, ever changing filter of
Your eyes,
Drives a dagger deeper ever still,
In such elegant fashion,
Straight into the darkest corners of this empty room.

I once heard that to behold you was to play with fire,
That your touch bleeds the coldest winds of wintertime.
But they were only half right.
Forgive these words spewing out like ink from a broken pen,
Like dark ribbons of paint,
Collecting at the bottom of a metal tray.
My metal tray heart.
for the contest... will post link soon... must go sleep..


Edit: Forgot to add the word "bleeds" but that is now changed. I also didn't add the links, so I dunno if points were subtracted..

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:iconmy-soul-bleeds-ink:

Also.. Umm, I guess you could say that the poem is pretty self-explanatory. It's about a girl who's full of fiery passion yet coldness of heart, leaving a trail of heartbreak in her wake. The style is free, as with much of my poetry, because I try to focus more on the message than stylistics.
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007Balel's avatar
I like how you interpreted this.. the imagery is very effective...
I really like the last line of the poem.... "my metal tray heart"... giving that cold hard solid feeling....